Nov 24, 2015 Hey guys this is a song in working on right now, I plan to completely redo the vocals on the first verse, just wanted to see what advice you guys could offer, I feel like I'm slightly ahead of the beat on the verses, also if anyone is interested I was waiting on a guy to send me a verse for the middle verse but he hasn't sent it back yet and it's been like a month so I was thinking of looking for another person. Lemme know what you guys think, all criticism is welcome. @CreativeSXN
Nov 25, 2015 Your flow seems a bit robotic/restricted and also a bit off-beat (but you're aware of this issue).
