Sep 25, 2015 all ive done today is this. lyrics: torn rose on the floor and more i see through flares of all your evening stares sunlight shining there and where were you when i had moves to grow and strewn my truth along the coast i almost feel sorry i didnt mean to say that aint patient just bold and since boast and got penchant for pendants and painting the truth as a hoax i bid you adieu, i do coming off of a binge i got karma in me i am the vengeance of armaments men and women had chalked up to valor im candid my candor aint planned it fantastic this banter im chandler im joey im ross at a loss all my friends since been b------s im pensive and petty can’t write for a second ‘fore lightening come wrecks it i aint trying make sense but the clarity enters i bid you adieu cause you stared through december not sayin a word but whats worse was the measure of intellect it took shun me forever mommy whats pleasure finding its difficult that i can tell ya memorabilia medical fella felt the roof crumble from pressure plunge into better found plunder in endings and this just beginnings i bid you adieu, i do coming off of a binge im on toxins again all of this chalk it to uppers and SWIM swimming in meds someone i met remain anonymous remain anonymous someone i met remain anonymous dont tell their name or call it quits dont tell their kids help hide their frame dont rip their reins be diligent everyone got their own pain place pics in place pictures in frame dont sip the same this is so fire i called all my friends to tell em im rappin im rappin like them rapping like him following trends ugh i just realized what i mightve just said f---, im trapped in this pit up, lazarus lift me im bane of existing and cane is whats missing im able to sniff things they aint gonna miss me its nifty im nuclear and imma s---t em up and in the veins in my veins imma s---t em up im up lookin @ the moon in love im lookin all at the moon in love i got the lunar lunacy tho all my dawgs they act new to me ay those are my dawgs thought they knew its me ay i thought i thought they knew its me ay but they act knew to me oi neuter em neuter em ay tell em now tell em now tell em now ay that we aint play, that we aint play f--- what you say ay i bid u adieu i do i do @CreativeSXN
Sep 25, 2015 think this would've benefited from a slower and more relaxed flow and a softer, less thug style delivery
Sep 25, 2015 i've told u b4 i think ur slower flow/relaxed normal voice is fine i also prefer it to the thuggish biting since it's actually u
Sep 25, 2015 [/QUOTE] i wouldnt say this is biting but i get what you're saying man i just feel like the normal me is too boring
Sep 26, 2015 Yeah the second half of the song is so much better than the first...I really should've made it more even lol
Sep 26, 2015 I never pointed out how my 2nd verse on this is basically addressing ur thug biting comment hahah
Sep 26, 2015 I liked this one too. The vocals is way too loud though, its overpowering the beat. Your flow was interesting and i didnt mind it but i see what @Cyreides is saying by a more relaxing flow would fit better on this beat
Sep 26, 2015 word vocals are too strong, you're right the 2nd half of this track is one of my favorite things ive done recently...for some reason i cant get that bit from 3:23-3:25 out of my head where the "aideu, i do i doOO" shifts pitches it sounds so good to me first half of the track is rough af tho
Sep 26, 2015 f--- im glad you liked it man!! i always appreciate people who arent creative section regulars stopping by to post their thoughts
