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A track I've been working on....

Started by Renovator, Jul 5, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Renovator
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    Renovator

    Jul 5, 2015
    I usually produce EDM music but recently I've been working on Hip Hop music and I wanted to get some feedback on some music I'm currently producing

    Its just the beginning stages and it hasn't been layered yet
     
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    Added a new link
     
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Jul 5, 2015
    Has a similar feel to Still Dre beat.
     
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    Jul 6, 2015
    I hope it doesn't sound too simular that I'm plagiarizing it
     
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    What I meant was that it reminds me of it only. I'm not sure if they're similar at all if we're talking technically but yeah.

    Was meant to be praise, and not meant to get you worried or anything. ;D
     
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    Jul 6, 2015
    That's cool I was just checking :)

    I've wrote a hook for it but I'm not gonna record it as I can't rap for s--- lol

    Here it is - It's a new day and I've got something to say, this time ill come alive when they come out to play, haters are gonna have to pray, cos I'm back to stay, this is my life and it's a new day
     
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    In your mind how would this hook be delivered over your beat?
     
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    It will go over four bars and repeated for another 4 bars to create an 8 bar hook
     
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    anymore feedback would be great ppl
     
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    Jul 7, 2015
    @Cyreides give Reno some feedback when you have the chance mang. :bmmpr:
     
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    Jul 7, 2015
    I dig it :)
     
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    Cyreides gfy

    Jul 7, 2015
    Honestly, hearing the spikes in your track makes me want to hear your EDM stuff. Sounds like it could be pretty interesting, not to say that this isn't, as it is and pretty well produced too... but EDM is more up my alley and it's enticing...

    Do you have a soundcloud or anything with any of your other work?
     
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    Jul 7, 2015
    reminds me of Dre, great job man
     
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    Jul 8, 2015
    Im currently not on soundcloud but I do share a lot of my work on music forums

    Here is something I did last year


     
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    Jul 8, 2015
    I like the vibe, sounds west coast
     
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    What do you think of my EDM track?
     
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    I think it has potential, but I'm not particularly a fan of the synths you used. I think I actually prefer your hip hop style tho
     
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