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Started by Narsh, Oct 27, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Oct 27, 2015
    with the rollout of chef curri vol. 1 officially over (now that the song of the day thread has reached a close), i thought id record something quick as a danka of sorts for u guys, hope u like it

    :wub:



    lyrics:
    Thoughts surmising, caught conniving
    Cauterizing my insides and offering my guys a slice
    Piece of soul they idolized
    I'm high and I'm on eyes tonight
    High off what I see in them, the life inside your little lens
    Wither when the weather changes
    Whittle brittle sticks exchange them
    Sickle cell i carry traits likes ringing bells
    I'm married wait that's living h---

    I'll carry fate like she had fell
    I'm a gentleman as well
    Down the wishing well Alice fell
    Grab and yell tattered self
    Battered by a ragged belt
    Can't stand yourself
    Santa helps the seasons change cancerous
    Behaviors bane

    Banished like irreverence
    Let em hate
    Separate sedatives from suicide
    Who's alive who am I crucified criticized
    Cool inside red hot pride
    Mood of mine can I fly
    Move aside imma try
    Dudes who lie a usual sight
    So I maneuver thru the music
    Im a lucid loop like lucys eyes
    Lunar light Illuminate in leu of spite
    ...Igloo inside my ugly hide
    It grew like Hyde a height that I cannot describe

    Elusive like a cursive slight of hand
    Our worth inside the earth tonight
    Dirty as the cup of Sprite
    Heard me in the afterlife
    Words are hollow as the hype
    Ignore them they kno not what's right
    Im only here for my own guys
    Hide the prize hide it tight hold it I might jack a slice
    With my rapport as sharpened Knife
    I'll see u as poltergeist

    At the red light
    I see death ride
    Thought it b by
    By my bedside
    But a but a hollow Halo might
    Help a heart hide
    All the alrights
    the pained goodbyes
    Strained and slighted
    All the pain inside
    Paint a prize paint a poem, uh
    Paint disguise, paint the skies
    Paint a picture please
    U really owe em
    Before u go a simple a note, uh
    clean disclosure
    Hold them 'fore u leave tonight, uh
    Drop the boulder
    Sisyphus
    U neednt hold it
    Hold my hand I'll hone the moment
    Home is where the heart do soften
    I'm in
    My own lane don't bargain
    Crossroads cause more pain they do solve em
    So just come and take me if its honest
    And my time to tie the knot is on us
    It's on us
    Just do it if it's honest

    @CreativeSXN @Jehovah @FreeAgent @Fire Squad @yeezyfan11 @Michael Myers @Astro @JG2 @Oliver Queen @ThyNeighbour @ThatAwkwardGuy

    :hugs:
     
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  2. JG2
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    JG2 Thugger Lover

    Oct 27, 2015
    damnnnnnn this part was so nice. the flow on this song was so fluid.

    loved the project man. excited for more. keep it up.

    (if i ever have time, i got a beat coming your way :) )
     
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    Narsh

    Oct 27, 2015
    :allears:

    :mjcry:
     
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Oct 27, 2015
    :sweatt:
     
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    Narsh

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    Ricky FORUM BOY SUMMER

    Oct 28, 2015
    :wow::bigquint:
     
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    FreeAgent Resurrected like Jesus

    Oct 28, 2015
    This track :happypepe::happypepe::happypepe:

    Chef Curri vol 2 teaser :dance2:
     
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    Thy 000000

    Oct 28, 2015
    :whew::whew::whew:
    Dope f---ing track bro.
     
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    YaBoyTr

    Oct 28, 2015
    This hard.

    Loved the beat and your flow goes well with it
     
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    Narsh

    Oct 28, 2015
    glad you liked it m8 upload_2015-10-28_9-34-0.png
    nah, those are still coming :dkk:
    upload_2015-10-28_9-34-46.png :sweatt:
    ok THIS hard :hard:
     
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    gorealsteady heal & create

    Oct 28, 2015
    First thing that came to mind: "I'm a lyrical spiritual miracle individual"

    But bro this sounds like you took all my criticisms to heart! :hugs: :whew:

    Your style is skyrocketing tbh...
     
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    Narsh

    Oct 28, 2015
    haha im glad u like it m8 :whew:
     
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    Narsh

    Oct 28, 2015
    why @Boos always be lurkin' :rickross:
     
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    Oct 28, 2015
    I check out your stuff from time to time lol. I gotta project coming soon with my friend (I'm just the engineer/semi producer with creative input, not a rapper) but I gotta check the section 80 competition :khaled2:
     
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    Narsh

    Oct 28, 2015
    lmk when it dropsss
     
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    :whistling:
     
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    Narsh

    Nov 6, 2015
    @LasiK thoughts/tips on the mixing on this?

    this is still all me from beginning to end..hopefully you can noticed improvement from the last time u peeped anything i did hahaha

    vocals are too loud for one :wow2:
     
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