New Rap Demo, give me feedback p-----s,

Started by Roachboy, Oct 14, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Roachboy
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    Location: growing patchy a--- facial hair

    Oct 14, 2015


    Check out my other stuff too while you are there and let me know what i did well and what i need to work on.
     
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  2. reservoirGod
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    reservoirGod reckless adventurer.

    Oct 14, 2015
    Wow. With that attitude? No thanks.
     
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  3. rapmusik
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    wow, you're aggressive!

    vocal quality is s-----y. weird mixing.

    there's some feedback for you fa----.
     
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  4. TheBlackSheep
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    TheBlackSheep TDOSS is RAP AOTY.

    Oct 14, 2015
    :emeh: Nah
     
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