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Memory Lane (rough draft)

Started by Victim, Nov 13, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Victim
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    Victim

    Nov 13, 2015
    Another song im working on, wanted some feedback before I polish up the writing and flow.

     
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    Translucent I just slapped Dre

    Nov 13, 2015
    I dig the writing. for the most part your flow is on point, but there is spots where it falters a bit. I like the layering on your vox.

    Keep pushin on homie
     
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    Victim

    Nov 13, 2015
    Thanks man, I heard some of your beats the other day on soundcloud, outstanding stuff dude, id love to work on something together.
     
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    Translucent I just slapped Dre

    Nov 13, 2015
    Most definitely dude. Hit me up anytime
     
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    Cyreides gfy

    Nov 14, 2015
    As usual man, I dug this
     
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    Juney Dark Art Deco Killer Mango

    Nov 14, 2015
    You sound like Obie Trice a tad

    dope track
     
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    rapmusik 4

    Nov 14, 2015
    haha wow I'm not the only one who caught that as well!

    good s---
    @Victim
     
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