I actually listened to it when you posted it, i just forgot to criticize it for some reason. All i can say is that you're heading the right way dude, I'm enjoying everyone sofar. It's hard to say something bad at this point because i know you will keep getting better, i can tell you have an ear for this. So growth will automatically be a result for you every single time you make something new. As for this particular song, like you said it's missing a hook, but this is deffo contest material where they can just spit a few bars.

d--- dude, they're not to far fetched at all, i love them both, seriously! FS is dope as f---, it has so much potential! It reminds me of Timbaland beats, in a good way. WTF2 feels undone though, but i really REALLY like the way you're headed, especially after the beat you made for that competition too. Keep at it man, this is great!

Nice i like that, let me know when you upload new material, would love to listen!

Ok so i listend through those showing on the main page.

First, they all kinda sound alike, maybe try using different sounds more. Second, they sound very generic imo, try making up more unique sounds, something new and fresh. Third, they're not very fluent/liquid, everything is hitting exactly where it's suposed to, try overlapping or mixing in a different way. More layers can sound really good if you do it right!

Aight will check them out, want me to be brutally honest or lie?

Before i listen to those beats, you made them?

Ha ha. Bro... I LOVE your current avatar.

Banned them all

i got a grudge, good one. i really dont give a f--- about this site or you for that matter, everytime i post something you neg me cause your a h--- with no life, get over your self

you are truly a loser you go around the net bad repping everything. hold on to your grudge cuz thats all you got you stupid f---in canadian, take the L and cry about it you little b----

nah i dont give a s--- about my reps, but its pointless to bad rep for dumb s---. but go ahead see if i care

the post was in a topic that said lupe or kudi. i said slighty cudi. youre too happy with that neg rep button

your r-----ed, you agree with but neg me. how much sense does that make...maybe you should set your happy chemical down its f---ing up your logic dumbass

im just working on some s--- for myself, just to k--- time. i make 100s of beats a week and probably finish 3. haha so im getting no place quick, but its all good.

Yeah i figured when i redownloaded it i would give you a shout and a chance to install it

no , not the show, never really watched the show too much. Im talking about the game. Cyndiquil was the very 1st pokemon you got in gold/silver and I always picked him. And in the Blue/Red version i always picked charmander. I realize that in the show the very 1st are charmander, squirtle, and bulbasaur.

STILL my point is I love typhlosion from the 1996 game for the Gameboy color, I remember i was addicted to that game, and I never picked the water or leaf guy , i loved the fire guy cyndiquil... lol. and i get what your saying..

i know, cyndiquil was there early but Typhlosion, the evolved form came like years later. Wierd.

cant believe i am either, the pokemon wiki told my that down there 0.0 guess im wrong

Ahh your right. I actually researched it and "Typhlosion" is the 56th pokemon and Charzard was the 23rd pokemon created in the series -.- still they are both part of the first 150
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