Close Your Eyes

Started by Charlton01, Nov 6, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Charlton01
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    Nov 6, 2015


    Hey guys @CreativeSXN
    give this track a listen, started off as a youtube beat that I was just freestyling over but ended up writing some lyrics and thought I'd record it and put it out there.
    I recorded and mixed my vocals at home (unfortunately vox over a single wav file for the beat) and wanted to see how it sounds to other people.

    Any comments and criticism is appreciated !!
    I'm more looking for feedback to do with the recording (and mixing) quality as that's the main reason I put this out there but if you have comments to do with my rhymes/delivery im open to listen to that as well !

    Keen for your opinions hombres :)
     
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  2. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Nov 6, 2015
    Sounds kinda low quality (beat/vocals mainly).

    I dig it though.
     
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  3. TheBlackSheep
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    TheBlackSheep TDOSS is RAP AOTY.

    Nov 6, 2015
    Yeah, low quality. But it's OK :emoji_thumbsup:
     
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  4. Charlton01
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    Nov 7, 2015
    Appreciate it hombres!
    Yeah I wasn't expecting much from it given I don't even have monitors, and the beat was literally just off youtube! haha
    Glad to know it has some value though! :)
     
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