Dec 27, 2015

This is real s-----y and I'm real drunk so I don't give a fuuuuuck. Anyway the final freestyle in my Revenge Trilogy. Don't think I actually posted the first two but whatever @CreativeSXN

 

Dec 27, 2015

this is dope but gotta plan your flows better if u get what i mean. like u had cool ideas here and there, and like charisma in the adlibs and s--- but they couldve benefited from being more on beat. the "oh lordy" type s---. really liked the flow/delivery for "im murderin u its an all out attack" but as a whole this sounds like a verse that couldve sounded a lot better on a different beat

actually yeah, i like the flow for the most part and how frantic it sounds, but it sounds like if i cut and pasted these vocals onto a more fitting beat, it would be 100x better

mixing is rough too, u did it ur self right? what do u use again?

also that young thug shade cannot stand SMH

 

Dec 27, 2015

Appreciate the feedback, i was trying not to sound so dull because most people say I sound too robotic, never really understood that though tbh, yeah as for the beat, I wanted to use this particular beat for an actual written song with a chorus and s--- that I would try to flow more to it because I really like it and it's made by a SXN80 producer but it was the only one I had on my tablet cause my laptop crashed.
I use Acid Pro 7.0 it's mixing capabilities are real s-----y, or maybe it's just my mixing capabilities, lol.
Thugger was just the first that came to mind, usually i throw all my shade at Rick Ross, Fetty was just there for the sake of rhyming. I don't actually listen to either of them but I don't like dislike them either.

 

Dec 27, 2015

lmao word...but yeah the vocals were too loud...and like they could probably benefit from even something as simple as more reverb/echo. but im all guesswork when it comes to mixing lol

 

Dec 27, 2015

That's actually been something I've noticed with my vocals, I use SMS Sync or Studio Beats depending on my mood, and they always sound perfect on them but then when I take them off and just play it through speakers my vocals sound waaaay too loud, I've done some experimenting with reverb and echo, I usually just use it on it to or putrid though because acid pro has tons of options for reverbs and echoes and I can never find one I like that sounds good to me with my rapping.
I definitely am pure guesswork myself.

 

Dec 27, 2015

the bass is louder on those headphones i think so its weird. if u dont have the ear for it yet, in my experiences, it helps to just mix on normal headphones. cuz then at least it already sounds like how it would after u export it

on garageband there just a master echo/reverb that i have on like 10% and 20% respectively

but like i said, i shouldnt be giving u advice lol

 

Dec 27, 2015

s--- Ive been meaning to get GarageBand after you said that's what you used. I keep forgetting.

 

Dec 27, 2015

PRODUCED BY ME!!! I liked it but the vocals need to better placed over the beat, they're way too loud and need some reverb, if you send me an acapella I can make a better mix. @The Last Son

 

Dec 27, 2015

h--- yeah I'll do that.

 

Dec 28, 2015

Just finishing up, I think you will like it!

 

Dec 28, 2015

Awesome man, I'm sure I'll love it.