Jun 28, 2016 The narrative is extremely loose on the song, but I appreciate the ridiculousness of it, like all this crazy outlandish s--- will happen before I'll find someone right for me. The second verse is really the verse(perhaps the only?) that drives that home. But calling that a narrative is using narrative very loosely.
Jun 28, 2016 this !!! sadly flow & Beat are not that good. + its lacks replay value like 90 % of Ems material since MMLP2.
Jun 28, 2016 i think his flow is perfectly on beat but is just that is not appealing , too fkin technical and yes lacks replay value
Jun 28, 2016 It's impressive to look at the rhymes the first time, but it's literally such a s--- song it's unbelievable.
Jun 28, 2016 Underscored is the main rhymes (ah-ih-uh-uh-ah) Red is the "uh" sound, Blue is the "ah" sound Green is the "ih" sound (There's two kinds of "ih" sounds here, the "s---" kind and the "in" kind. I chose to only color the hard kind, like in "s---, kick" ...etc) Keep in mind I'm listening to how he enunciates everything, not necessarily the textbook pronounciation of the words Thought I’d give in to the pressure. Collapse and crumble perhaps Relapsing under that. Well that's a bunch of crap In the clutch, I'm the Captain Crunch of rap And I'm sick of acting humble, that's enough of that f--- that s---, cud the sack. Like it's a natural reaction That's why I'm actually trapped in this shoving match Cause push keeps coming to that. I can keep getting my a--- kicked and coming back Like a sarcastic crumpled sack of s---, still mad. Disgruntled, had some struggles, yeah But that passion and hunger's back. What a fantastic juggling act And the way I flip my tongue on the track. It's like verbal acrobatics, but in fact. Last time I tried to pull off a dramatic stunt as drastic I f---in' crashed my hovercraft. After I strapped a duffel bag to my back and stuffed a massive punchin' bag in it and an elastic bungee strap .... rubber, plaster, a thumb tack And a piece of plastic bubble wrap. Went spastic and f---in' snapped. Jumped and splashed in a puddle of battery acid stumbled back, recovered, back flipped and landed on a gymnastic tumble mat And for my last trick, lunge on back latch on a NASA shuttle flap, f---in' snap the rudder in half Chuckled and laughed, utter my last rebuttal and just as I'm to come crashin' I grab my Go-Go-Gadget inflatable gigantic humongous mattress and ceramic construction hat. Rub my magic mushroom tat for luck then splat, get up from that. Face taped to a waste paper basket. Throw up then gasp, lungs collapsed and that's more likely than finding someone that's You fa----s better like this, put a lot of time and effort into it
Jun 28, 2016 You are right that it does lack replay value, but it's not a BAD song. I disagree, Even his speedom verse is worth a few extra listens just for the flow Alot of yall saying he fell off. Some of us keep telling yall that you sleeping on some decent s---. Unlike most people em doesn't really go for the dopest sounding beats, he goes for stuff that he can show off his skill on.
Jul 2, 2016 I know what Em tried to do... but he's just forcing so many words in this song. h--- he even says "electronic computers" as a useless redundancy. He could have condensed so many lines but kept it nonsensical for the sake of flow. Some lines are gems in that heap of bs, but overall it's a forgettable track.
Jul 3, 2016 No, it is a BAD song. I wanna puke when he starts shoving 78205729 words into a monotonous continuous two dimensional flow while this random thud thumps constantly in the background as he says random s--- for 3 minutes. It's sooooo unappealing. One of the worst Eminem songs sonically that I've ever heard. Just no real artistry at all besides the rhyming. Amateurish in several musical regards.
Jul 4, 2016 I want to like it as it sounds like an honest attempt to recapture the absurdest, prime-era Eminem in terms of content. There's a few good lines in there. BUT. It might be the worst flow he's ever had. I don't care how tightly knitted his rhymes are anymore, it's no longer impressive. Just f---ing rap normal.
Jul 4, 2016 the flow is alot more than two dimensional though. And yeah, there is artistry in the lyrical content. Eminem is a rapper not a singer mate, not saying his songs should sound like that, but if iyou give that much f---s about how it sounds instead of what he's saying then you should really listen to young thug instead of Eminem. you act like he intentionall sits and say's , "the more lines the better" He said it multiple times that when he starts rapping or writing his mind just goes off and more and more ryhmes start to appear. He doesnt sit in his room for weeks to write one song. So it doesnt at all seem forced and the flow is amazing. He's not trying to tell a story or anything. It's just random bars. What the f--- were you expecting, some kind of TPAB s--- where he's screaming his a--- off about hating god or some song subliminally about how good p---- feels? It's just your average eminem/Rap song. why should he omit lines that come to him when everything flows near perfectly.
Jul 4, 2016 why b----? you guys might not have realized it, but eminem isn't trying to be the old him anymore, i doubt he ever was after relapse. It just sounds like him rapping random bars that happen to have brillinat rhyme schemes. It's not something he hasn't done before. Seriously it's just a random song he made with bars in it and a nice flow. Yeah it sounds monotone becuase he didn't give a f---. The words and the ryming flows speak for themselves, no need to sing or autotune rap like some b----. Listen the d--- words and appreciate the wordplay and skill or simply.....f--- off and listen to whatever type of music suits you.
Jul 4, 2016 Chill, I don't like the s-----y song because it's a s-----y song. It's just a bunch of rhymes taped together. It didn't appeal to me. You basically said what I said, but are so angry someone else doesn't like it. Maybe Eminem should spend more time on his song writing, he'd have so many more gems rather than just spazzing aimlessly everytime.
Jul 4, 2016 Lol if you think im angry, As far as im concerned 90% of rap songs are either random or rinsed and repeated trash about drinking in the club or some s--- about women. but im sure every song from other artistes are soo deep and powerful right. Having a creative rhyme scheme is the same as having a creative sound like thug. it's just em's way of doing things. There's more to songs than meaning in the words, and sometimes the creative ways in which you put them together is what makes a song great. that's the appeal in the song. if you don't like it, then f--- off. Simple, listen to J, cole
