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Young Thug Best Posts: HipHopDX reviews Slime Season 3

  1. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Mar 28, 2016
    my first review for HipHopDX

    http://hiphopdx.com/reviews/id.2670/title.young-thug-slime-season-3#comment-widget

    honestly...i have a version that like 200 words longer but reads a lot better. i dont understand the obsession with cutting things down so much, especially if it hurts the point im trying to make but w/e. hope you guys like it.

    @ThuggerSXN
     
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  2. DKC
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    DKC shortygonletmecrush

    Mar 28, 2016
    Because with journalism, usually if you can say the same thing in less words you should. The audience for a general review is "rap fans" not "thug stans." It will help you a lot to not get so attached to portions of your writing. I know it's hard but there's a reason the writer/editor dynamic exists.

    Anyway I read the draft last night, will read the final in a few!
     
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  3. lil uzi vert stan
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    lil uzi vert stan

    Mar 28, 2016
    tip: you shouldnt write sentences more then maybe 10-12 words. this is an ok review but ur first sentence isnt dynamic enough and is a run on. im guilty of this too but something to keep in mind.
     
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  4. Mikey
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    Mikey

    Mar 28, 2016
    @Narsh u got the played at weddings thing from WPG . I remember him saying that about a song a while ago & Ive seen u say it about various songs since lol.​
     
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  5. Oldboy
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    Oldboy

    Mar 28, 2016
    no s---

    which means its 7.6 out of 10

    i am really really surprised by the low score
     
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  6. Soldier
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    Soldier big cuntry's alias

    Mar 28, 2016
    u really show ur age sometimes red rum
     
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  7. Groovy Tony
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    Groovy Tony Grandma's baby Eddie Kane

    Mar 28, 2016
    I wonder who this is

    "
    Section80WeOutcheaMarch 28, 2016 | 11:43 AM

    I used to hate Young Thug. I used to think to myself "What a h---. All Young Gay does is smoke penises and wear dresses. I'm going to stick to real rap like J. Cole and Tech N9ne." However, after reading this, I decided to check this project out. WOW! It changed my life! Young Thug is truly the greatest artist of our generation. Perfect rating, too."
     
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  8. Oldboy
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    Oldboy

    Mar 28, 2016
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  9. Oldboy
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    Oldboy

    Mar 28, 2016
    everytime i read you usertitle my mind goes "i didnt mean to hurrrrtttt you"
     
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  10. boyz n the suburbs
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    boyz n the suburbs In my city, I'm a young God

    Mar 28, 2016
    Some things could've been phrased better, but what do I know? I'm not a serious writer.
    Decent review nonetheless.

    3.8 is a fair score.
    It's a good project, but definitely not his best.
     
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  11. Lil Squeed
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    Lil Squeed French Montana Stan

    Mar 28, 2016
    I always thought HHDX was trash, but I suppose I can enjoy it, now.
     
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  12. Slyk
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    Slyk God made a prophet.

    Mar 28, 2016
    3.8 > 3.5
     
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  13. furface
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    furface ひ

    Mar 28, 2016
    Honestly I've been a bit disappointed in the days following this release. It's not that I dislike SS3... there's not a song I don't like. But for me it doesn't have a single song as good as the highs on Barter 6, SS1 or 2, or even I'm Up. Like none of these songs are Top 25 Thugger for me, except maybe With Them. So I guess I'm disappointed because if he was gonna only put out 8 tracks they should have all been top-tier. If this had the same amount of tracks as SS1 or 2 with the same caliber of quality as the already existing ones I think I would like it more. It's just underwhelming I guess.

    I'm glad the Slime Season era is over because I have extremely high expectations for HyTunes.
     
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  14. lil uzi vert stan
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    lil uzi vert stan

    Mar 28, 2016
    hah i didnt. i try to show @Narsh tuff love sometimes. it may come off as mean, but my heart is in the right place

    like, narsh this is a 600 word review and ur first sentence is over 30 words.you can see how thats poor utilization
     
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  15. Mikey
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    Mikey

    Mar 28, 2016
    SS2 definitely not better than SS1. B6 & SS1 is very close though. SS3 is underated by Narsh imo.
     
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  16. DKC
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    DKC shortygonletmecrush

    Mar 28, 2016
    What? 7.6 is a good score. Plus HHDX is a real website so I'm sure they helped dictate his score to their standards somewhat.
     
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