Feb 18, 2016 If the lyrics in Yeezus were re-done from awful to somewhat competent, the album would have no flaws to weigh down it's immense strengths. I wrote all of these revisions in about 20 minutes. I mean if Kanye couldn't have taken an extra hour to rework some of the lyrics, that's pretty lazy. On Sight Revise Verse 1: Yeezy season approachin' f--- whatever y'all been hearin' f--- what, f--- whatever y'all been wearin' A monster about to come alive again Yeezus Christ just rose back from the dead k--- a bent cop and s---t his friends Shake the P D up like Parkinsons Take my number and lock it in You aint cooperate, then f--- you then Too many wolves in this house of sin Real n----- back in the house again Black Timbs all on your couch again Black d-ck all in your spouse again And I know she like chocolate men She got more n----s off than Cochran, hah! Revise Chorus: (s---t em down) On Sight! x2 Revise Verse 2: Laser and a crosshair, a red gloss glare Threat palpable, fear in the atmosphere If you come to my door without a warrant I'll s---t your face up like a bloody abortion Black and unarmed, blood on Christ palm One more fight to ignite and the strikes on Knock your wig back, head severed and snapped 1400 billionaires, only 7 of em black White billionaire profits, we want a portion Private military corps do all the extortin CIA and FBI use their funds to support it Pig wanted a pension, well I guess he bought it Black Skinhead Revise Chorus: From: "I keep it 300, like the Romans 300 b------s, where's the Trojans?" To: "Accept me in the flesh, like I'm Odin New history in text, yea, I wrote it" I Am A God Revise Chorus: I am a god Even though I'm just a lamb of God Move mountains in the land of God Don't know if you understand or not I am a god Revise Chorus 2: From: "So hurry up with my d--- massage In a French-a--- restaurant Hurry up with my d--- croissants" To: "Kiss the ground that I'm standin on Humility's just a f---in d--- facade Movin platinum, if you care or not" Verse 2: I just talked to Jesus He said, "What up, Yeezus?" They trying to me a villain Tho I'm make a killin He said just be chillin They all got an opinion Livin' is not sinnin' Yall bound to hurt some feelins Cuz Yeezy speak that real s--- Some niggaz wont like you Just cuz they aint like you Try to undercut and spite you Cuz they cannot fight you Jesus is the most high Yeezus is a close high Mi casa su casa That's our cosa nostra New Slaves Fine as is. Hold My Liquor Revise several lines in Verse 1: From: "One more hit and I can own ya One more f--- and I can own ya" To: I'm the man that stole ya I'm the man that stole ya From: p---- had me floatin' Feel like Deepak Chopra p---- had me dead Might call 2Pac over To: Heaven had me floatin Feel like I might know ya Don't act like were dead Yeezy movin boulders I'm In It I'm not even going to try on this one. I guess the album could have f----- up song. Blood on the Leaves Fine as is. Guilt Trip Verse 1 Revise: Maybe it's cause she into Leos and I was into trios Plus all the trips to Rio couldn't have helped It's gettin' cold, better bring your ski clothes Peekin' through the keyhole, the door locked by myself And I'm feelin' it right now, cause it's the time when my heart got shot down Locked up, rust shut, beating, bleeding and f----- up Pour a little champagne, cranberry vodka Feelin' lied to like parents never said you adopted If I stay I may be sick, another loss chalked up She lookin for her daddy, I wanna be a father On to the next product Focus on the future like a witch doctor Hello, I am your conscious introduced proper Persona on the news lookin used, all washed up A product of love that was bundled and squashed up Oh! Send It Up Verse 1 Revise: Rockstar, b---- call me Elvis Fake friends call me selfish Success got em jealous Cash just drives wedges I feel so burnt at both edges Tattoos, how they break the news You only real if you make the news Do you wanna be in my shoes? Yeah, you wanna be my shoes! Other niggaz got cocaine to move I be goin hard, I got a name to prove The music make the pain improve Verse 2 Revise: This is the realest s--- in the club Since I adorned the cub Wait, is that Kanye West? You wish you coulda sworn it was She said "Can you get my friends in the club" I say "Can you get my Benz in the club" If not treat your friends like my Benz Park they a--- outside till the evening end My people dyin, I don't need this s--- The blood is on the leaves again Black and spilling from the trees of sin Cops tellin niggaz freeze again And s---t em cuz they negro skin Rotten soil can't breed good kin I want a world with less evil in We all wanna see a genius win Yeezus just rose again! Bound 2 Fine as is.
Feb 18, 2016 Although I think the lyrics on Yeezus are awful at times, I don't see the point of this thread. Good job? Doesn't make a difference or anything.
Feb 18, 2016 yeezus is arguably kanye's worst album musical wise , which is his best atu , making "good" sounding rap music aka pop rap flow wise production wise lyricism wise , some of the verses are atrocious , like wale level
