Dec 22, 2015

I don't know if this is where a thread like this should be in, if it isn't can a mod move it for me pls.
Anyway if you're a writer of any form feel free to write anything on, and we will give our input that's how its supposed to work.

 

Dec 22, 2015

I'll go first just let me think of a summary.

 

Dec 23, 2015

Have you thought of a summary yet?

 

Dec 23, 2015

I was just about done with it, but it was too long and messed up as I was posting it. I'll probably try again after work.

 

Dec 24, 2015

Okay guys ill summarize my story for yall n----s.
"basically my story is about superheroes who start world war 3. They were once just regular comic book superhero's but a unfortunate series of events lead the to become hated among the general population. This leads to gangs of normal people killing off Heroes, when the hero's plead to the untied nation's there pleas get ignored. The hero's decide to create a new home in the pacific to escape the violence only for the world governments to simultaneously attack them in an effort to k--- them off. Most survive only to declare war on humanity which last 12 long years until it ends in nuclear Armageddon. 196 years later the story begins with a survivor of the war who exiled himself to Japan to escape his past only for it to catch up with him in the form of the united nations. They plan on retaking the world through brutal means and only he can stop it".

 

Dec 24, 2015

And there I my summary feel free to comment on if it sounded interesting or not. Or what I should try and fix,since this summary doesn't really paint the whole picture just ask any question and ill answer it.

 

Dec 24, 2015

@Narsh would you give a review of this summary?

 

Dec 24, 2015

That sounds interesting as f--- haha try writing the first chapter or something!!

 

Dec 24, 2015

Its a normal day in an average town. 3 friends have spent the night together and are waking up for school. 2 friends proceed to smoke lots of weed while the other one drinks booze. They go to the gas station and buy 5$ worth of gas but forgot to pump it in his van because they are is high as f---. They eventually end up running out of gas and make it late to their finals. after their first final they go to the van during break. They start smoking lots of weed. THEN suddenly a group of jihadi terrorist take the school hostage and are going batshit crazy in the school. The 3 friends are hot boxing the van though so the terrorist have no idea they are there. and the freinds are oblivious to what is going on. To sum it up they somehow end up saving the day with the help of a few teachers inside the school,law enforcment, and stupidness because they are high and drunk.

Once i figure out a good solid plot line than itll be dope af