Jul 26, 2015

new track



dont know if i should use this tag but oh well @CreativeSXN
lyrics:
i got a month i wont last anymore
im finna flex on the town
i got month i wont last anymore
they finna forget im around

i remember november with cameras
traveling touring the tandem towns
drifting like grifters stayed to the ground
like spongebob, i remember now
in the backseat with my little sis
no acne i was little still
we had a spill we’re relaxing still
watching the tv that came down
off in a dream i forget now
i remember im staring out windows
im remember the temperature tentative
lowering im in a hole,
however imma hold on to it
im higher than Eiffel no tower I fell off the top i devoured
the power in hour of absolute horror
i borrowed the sorrow somewhere so somber
cause after the driver collided my armor doubled in standard
and coupled with candor my parents distraught and my sister somewhere off in some other land I
sheltered mind, i felt a disguise, i looked in their eyes only once all the lies
flushed out my mind and i i compromised
i pretend to buy that we’d be alright
the guy that was the behind the wheel now had died
My sis was alive, my mom was alive
My dad hurt his eye but his ire was fine
Why was I the only one stuck on the outside
Mommy I cried, daddy I lied
I felt it in my spine
It hurt i recall
but im prepped for withdrawal
all fall imma ball cause all y’all tagalong
im off their allowance i found failure
accidents tailored isolating hysteria
syncopated suburbia the malice in the picket fence
we can just die again

i got a month i wont last anymore
im finna flex on the town
i got month i wont last anymore
they finna forget im around

Off an honor roll smoking lots of dope
Im anonymous lost a scholarship
Mom and pops have been on my mantelpiece
Looking at pictures thatre fitted in frames
Feeling I'm fighting the feeling of now feeling drained
I'm rolling on Molly like mamma I'm blessed
She tells me the Dali is who should impress
I'm looking I'm smirking who coulda guessed
Bearded no turban but I'm terrorist
To those who just look at the color and kin
It's muddled again my drinkll be browner my only skin
I'm slipping up out of my comforting whims
I'm picking up right where my daddy left off
Where his daddy left off
Where parentage pawns love for the cause
Jumble the jobs the mumble the praise
Accentuate odds and evens don't even factor into the entire facade
No breaking it even you should be breaking the vault
Making Em all happy you born
Sappy I know Ive been proud of less
My accent has worn...
I'll be back in morn
I lied to own
I vanishing now
Magic is prone to tantalize loss
Miracles found when mediums morphed
Convey the inner desire to walk
Off the plank I'm out of a job
I forget all who to thanks
Now I'm thanking Em all
Thanking Em my daddy
Thanking my moms
Writing that letter that pen is my cross
Lightening whenever I take a quick pause
It is there loss
I am a boss
Wow wow I am absolved
Lost in the heavens inside of this cup
I'm drinking it up im giving a f---
You wanted me right? You wanted me wanted me right? Ight
Offer me price ice vice something so nice
To keep me from taking a knife as advice
Slicing they eyes the slits just surmise
Their vision aligned to tunnels hidden from light

 

Jul 28, 2015

yeah i need to put more thought into my writing for sure, i just write the first thing that comes to my mind. its never really intentional. glad you liked it man

yeah i definitely dont have as much control over my voice as i would like..im just waiting for my normal voice to sound rap-friendly tbh lol.

its too boring for my own tastes..but then again ive been told its actually not bad so maybe i should stop being critical of my self and trying more standard stuff again. just to see my progression

thanks for the feedback man

 

Jul 28, 2015

great advice, thanks man