Oct 23, 2022Alright, I'll be real with you. Your rhyming ain't bad, this was on beat actually too. There are 3 things you need to make it work at this point:
1. Better beats, this one sounds like it was made in 50 seconds on a phone app.
2. More charisma in your voice, put some more energy in it.
3. Better microphone.
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Oct 23, 2022
d--- what a b-----r. I think we need an artist spotlight on you bro. Low key best rapper right now. -
Oct 23, 2022
thought i’d post this to let you guys know i’m working on learning to follow a beat better
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Oct 23, 2022
ClassicRicky, JMG, poopdogg and 1 other person like this. -
Oct 23, 2022
Very good smoking loud to this song laterRicky, JMG, BIGFOOT and 1 other person like this. - May 7, 2024