sleepless nights cypher

Started by Narsh, Nov 18, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. JG2
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    JG2 Thugger Lover

    Nov 18, 2015
    Thug approves
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  2. Venblavi
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    Nov 18, 2015
    this is terrible. u want to be young thug so bad it's embarrassing. your autotune usage is amatuerish, u have no sense of rhythm or melody, your lyrics are incredibly awkward and read like a high schoolers poetry assignment for english class. if youre gonna keep making these, the least u can do is change your rap name to thugguerilla black
     
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  3. Ordinary Joel
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Nov 18, 2015
    That RnB feel
     
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  4. lil uzi vert stan
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  5. Narsh
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    Nov 18, 2015
    Good looks man, cyphers can only be 16 bars that's why it's so short but I think it makes it better
    this sounds absolutely nothing like thug

    could've at least made an effort to pick a track where I do try his style.

    Very lazy VBV

    0/10
     
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  6. Narsh
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    Nov 18, 2015
    Yeaaaah!!!
     
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  7. Venblavi
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    Venblavi colombian necktie tailor

    Nov 19, 2015
    :cam:stop it slime. the only reason this sounds "aboautlrly" nothing like thug is because its completely devoid of any good flow or melody.

    so the way u tried to autocroon and make your vocals echo at the end of lines, the entire intro, using the phrase "on that lil b----", the part where u literally quoted she notice me, none of this was u trying to be thug?

    that being said tho, dont let this deter u from making more music. every once in a while someone posts one of your songs on qq and we all have us a quick chortle at how awful it is so keep feeding the streets with comedic gold
     
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  8. Narsh
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    Nov 19, 2015
    Lmao where did I quote she notice me :'(
     
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  9. Narsh
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    Nov 19, 2015
    U took so long to write that nonsense that u quoted a post I edited like 45 mins ago w it's original typos :'(

    U relics r so embarrassing on this site
     
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  10. Proto
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    Proto drippin so pretty

    Nov 19, 2015
    :emoji_100::emoji_100: good s--- go౦ԁ s--- thats ✔ some good s--- right there right✔there ✔✔if i do ƽaү so my self :emoji_100: i say so thats what im talking about right there right there :emoji_ok_hand::emoji_ok_hand:(chorus: ʳᶦᵍʰᵗ ᵗʰᵉʳᵉ) mMMMMᎷМ НO0ОଠOOOOOОଠଠOoooᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒ Good s--- :'(:'(
     
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  11. Venblavi
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    Venblavi colombian necktie tailor

    Nov 19, 2015
    d--- your song is so s--- u didnt even listen to it after u recorded it huh? maybe that would also explain why its so bad :weebey:

    :lmaooo: dont flatter yourself. responding to your posts is such a low priority i just left the tab open after u responded
     
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  12. Narsh
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    Nov 19, 2015
    so bout that she notice me quote tho bb
     
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  13. Narsh
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    Nov 19, 2015
    r u broken
     
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    Nov 19, 2015
    Vbv thinks "on that lil b----" was a term created by thug and that auto tune singing =thug

    Is vbv low key the biggest slime on here?
     
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  15. Narsh
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    Nov 19, 2015
    he also said the "echo" at the end of my lines :'(

    i know he's trolling but i appreciate the free bumps regardless kidcudi.jpg
     
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  16. theg
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    Nov 19, 2015
    how about when you literally say "she notice me she notice me" you f---ing r-----
     
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  17. Narsh
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    Nov 19, 2015
    Got my ray ban on n I sing my song
    Got my bae back home
    Got my bae back south
    Went my way once now I just wanna come back

    Never gave a though to the sand that lapsed
    Just thought all plans find peace past prime
    At least at that i just need my time
    Find peace of mind from these replies

    Got my shades tucked low look like book keeper
    Heard my dreams hold more weight than I've been lead to believe
    I need u to see I need jubilee
    A couple sleepless nights on train to where u be

    Honorary my reprise i know U ain't ever asked for it
    Scary how these seems to b where I ought to be
    Marry me i wanted three kids by the sea
    Onamonapia on that lil b---- I love the freaks



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  18. theg
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    theg got that pma

    Nov 19, 2015
    ok but just because you didnt transcribe it doesn't mean you don't say it you f---ing idiot


    edit cause im not bumping this again:
    v idiot
     
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  19. Narsh
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    Nov 19, 2015
    :drakelaugh:
     
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  20. lil uzi vert stan
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    Nov 19, 2015
    not only is narsh a musical abomination (who makes usually capable forum rap stars @Jet @Mic look like biggie, tupac by comparison) but he's impervious to criticism lol. people give him a dose of reality and he dismisses it as "trolling"

    @Skippy u rly co-sign this s---?
     
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