Sep 27, 2015

me a little over a year ago...someone liked it recently so i thought i'd share it here again. @CreativeSXN



Revelations
Got a bunch of broads in the basement
Hatred, comin' from you all is so basic
Childish, And I'm going off f--- milage
I'm in the same lane Tracy almost died in
Silent, why can't we stop all this violence
The schools are our diamonds
The children are timeless
Sirens, pullin' in me in as I'm floatin'
Flyin' to Zion
I am the word of the God on papyrus
Climb it, the ladder to the eyelids of gods like mynas had thought in their times
We all live a lie, that's science
Their sacrifices of ices and killings were worthless
So are the murders and accidents happening around us
From just the birth of the mantra that life is important
It's on us, like the shadow of giants attacking our fortress
And I'm wildin', alive in the times when my faith is escaping, I'm tryin
Every breath that I take is retaliation
Try me
Im in a league with some tyrants
f--- all your guidance
Im putting some milage on top of my eyelids

Revelations

In heaven we see what we think are our morals
Murals of sorrow if god isn't followed
The words are as hollow as halos are ours
The higher the power the longer the shadow

Revelations
Face it you're never gonna make it
Hatred got it bottled up like some greatness
Break it watch the beat drop like basses
Aces in spades you and me goin places
Spaceships face lifts put a smile on my baby
Maybe make me happier to be me
Take these free lines of the white lady
Safely snort that cut god made me
Fated faded so I can't change me
Tracing the traces that traded my training
I'm lost. a vagabond with no pack of camels
I'm cheifin on parliaments by the precinct
Coke in the hollowed out tip of my laces
Crazy, that boi done lost all his faces
He's faceless
Just reading revelations

Revelations
Im seeing the future in front of my face and I'm scared
Abusing the juice is just proof that I care
Elation, I'm seeking so we can make babies

 

Sep 27, 2015

See, this flow, this voice/delivery. It's energetic enough to keep my attention all the way through, the voice's just occasionally got that upwards inflection at the end of some lines and it's a nice touch but not overdoing it.

 

Sep 27, 2015

yeah i thought youd like this haha

 

Sep 27, 2015

Whew that beat

You rode it perfectly Narshy

 

Sep 27, 2015

 

Sep 27, 2015

Go with this style yaw

 

Sep 28, 2015

yaww? this is more like how ill b when me and @Bleed work together tbh