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NARSH vs. BRASH: OUT NOW

Started by Narsh, Sep 29, 2015, in Music Add to Reading List

  1. Narsh
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    Narsh

    Sep 29, 2015
    this battle had some of my favorite lyrics to date...and it all feels wasted lol
     
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    gorealsteady heal & create

    Sep 29, 2015
    It's cool man. I'm just giving you my immediate criticisms as i hope you might notice something new/helpful in them.
     
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    LOL i thought this too! WHAT DID HE SAY THEN?!
     
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    Sep 29, 2015
    that pharrell happy connection was a good one
     
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    gorealsteady heal & create

    Sep 29, 2015
    It's not... it's clear to the viewer at home. You can only improve my man. Don't be scared to fail in some areas.
     
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    Sep 29, 2015
    for sure man its great feedback actually
     
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    Sep 29, 2015
    dont even remember that 1 lol. i had like 5 minute rounds for a 90 second battle like a douche hahah
     
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    Sep 29, 2015
    I like your fit.
     
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    gorealsteady heal & create

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    I like creative people... because for some reason i can talk on a positive wave length with them even when i'm criticizing their work.

    And i also learn from their criticism because i don't feel threatened or anything.
     
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    on the topic of criticism, i have one for you m8

    stop f---in talking about meek mill to annoy drake fans lol im just sayin :'(
     
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    enough 2 do the unthinkable and put my face where drake's is on the homepage?
     
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    gorealsteady heal & create

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    If you pay close attention you'll see i never do that actually. Only if its in good taste, i'll make a sarcastic joke about it. Just check who brings it up first.

    But i'll keep it in mind!
     
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  15. lil uzi vert stan
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    Sep 29, 2015
    just watched the first round. few thoughts:
    ur rap isnt pointed enough. its too generic. i have no clue if u researched this guy but he clearly found out about u and was vicioussssss.
    his stan darsh line in the beginning was lame but damnnnn he came hard. that said, if u deliver more like him -- less like a wannabe thugger performance, and more like a direct assault on ur opponent, it wouldve come across alot better

    nice work overall tho.
     
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    yeah and this would make me more accessible to a casual viewers, but id rather be a rappers rapper. id rather not have to alter how i naturally feel comfortable performing -- as long as i do what i do as best as i can do it, ill be happy. with that being said, i know this wasn't as good as the big ant battle, which was the next one, and i know that one wasnt as good as my most recent one. so im getting better with my style at the very least.

    i know you dont want battles but brash's approach is obviously rooted in the origins of the s---...where battling was like observational freestyling. he just does that in written form..but im never striving to be that kind of battler lol. i dont have any desire too
     
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    i rap about the origins of my name, "Narsimha," @ the end of my 3rd round btw

    :future:
     
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    OH YEAH I DID CALL MYSELF A FAX MACHINE :'(

    just started watching
     
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    Sep 29, 2015
    good, I wasn't imagining lmao

    gr8 chicken
     
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    lil uzi vert stan

    Sep 29, 2015
    i dont get how you can compete though if you arent doing what he does to some extent though, no? like shouldnt the point be to one up your opponent? maybe thats a novice question but if what ur doing sounds like some generic prewritten verse isnt that bad?

    whats "origins of the s---" mean
     
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