FiveOh!1 - Angels

Started by FiveOh1, Oct 15, 2022, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. FiveOh1
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    Oct 15, 2022
    A new track I’m still working on.
    It’s unlisted right now just wanted to share and get thoughts on what y’all think I should do to improve it. I know the hook is bad my hook game weak as f---.

    @CreativeSXN

     
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  2. FiveOh1
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    Oct 15, 2022
    Also if anyone wants to make cover art for it that’s better than mine
     
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  3. CSW
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    CSW Member 3461

    Oct 15, 2022
    i love this. there are so many layers to your metaphors and the deliveries are all really original
     
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    Ripper Roo big me

    Oct 15, 2022
    Hey bro, sorry your thread got overshadowed by my incoherent rambling and mental breakdown last night. I’m really going through it right now. I’ll check this song out soon!
     
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    BIGFOOT More than a myth!

    Oct 15, 2022
    Bro flow on second verse is

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    Ripper Roo big me

    Oct 15, 2022
    Those verses were deep man, awesome. I feel like the song could benefit from an emotional chorus sung by a woman, it would complement the verses nicely in my opinion
     
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  7. FiveOh1
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    Oct 15, 2022
    I agree. I need to see if I can find someone to do it.
    And thanks for listening I really appreciate it.
     
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    Oct 15, 2022
    Thanks bro the second is my favorite as well.
     
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    FiveOh1 Fallout

    Oct 15, 2022
    That’s okay bro, been there plenty myself. Hope you work through whatever it is that’s going on!
     
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