Dec 11, 2015 I Don't Mind It - I don't mind this one but I think that hook might have dragged on for too long but that verse was stellar. Aaaaay - This is dope as h--- dude, I'd like to see less use of auto-tune and see if you can naturally find that melodic voice/delivery in the future. Very good structure as well, the song flowed very well.
Dec 11, 2015 glad you liked em m8...and yeah i gotta get more confident with my own voice for sure so that im not stuck adapting such a heavy auto tune sound (which doesnt always sound good unless you mix it really well)
Dec 11, 2015 8. Livin' My Life Like a Prince prod. by MadReal download Spoiler: lyrics im livin my life like a prince im livin my life like a kid im livin my life like a prince i wanted this s--- since a kid all of this all of this b---- all of this all of this s--- the constant berating from them the accolades, ladies, and drinks poppin’ a bottle on whim snortin a line w/ SWIM of course then we’re fiendin’ a hit maybe a bar or a half to be safe my mama keep texting me lately, so i know that i have to be safe i know i am armed with the goddess of fate my grandpapa had died on this day his liver was blacker than gray more so morals, they white as this yay informal with time as they say you can only live in the moment, today you can own it and mold it like clay clone it and loan it to them they wanna decode what i have to say i wanna be bolder than midas was trained controlling my touch cause its rigged to turn you to gold like my wrist im livin my life like a prince im livin my life like a kid all of this that i had did i did it for qualities missed all of this that i had did i did it against all their wishes im living my life king, king, king, king, king king im lost in the stars im so far im on mars im on bars i go harder than them im tossed all my guards out the car i aint armed but im comin to swing id love to meet you in the space between our planet and skies they erased i never believed in a heaven since my dad lost his job for no reason i think that i might have been seven i promised him i would show reverence severing all of my ties now got me feeling like i owe them something several sedatives swishing goin str8 down my throat i dont listen im reclusive im hiding im hidden im livin my life like a legend seldom do they see me venting but im stressing inside i need welding the pressure the pressure keeps building your smile as precious as children you’re innocent sensitive different im militant meant to be missing Erasing my past like a christian caressing the a--- of a virgin for a second i thought i absolved it ill barter with satan im sure of it im livin my life like a prince im livin my life like a kid i bought all this all of this s--- just so i could show them im it i never knew any of this when i was alone as a kid my sister was sharpening wits i was just harping on hits karma is a such a lil b---- now i keep sniffing got drips talking to walls when i binge throwing up over the sink sure enough all of this s--- makes me feel like im still just a kid but im livin my life like a prince planning for when im a king probably one of the first tracks i worked on for this tape...not really a fan of how the hook came out in the end but its probably one of the strongest overall tracks on the project. i remember @Jet saying the verses were actually relatively straightforward/easy to follow for once lmao. imlivin'mylifelikeakingKINGkingKINGkingKING. @Ordinary Joel @Cyreides @Mike Tyson @ThyNeighbour @Bleed @Fire Squad @JG2 @Skippy @Immy @Raziel @yeezyfan11
Dec 13, 2015 not sure how i feel about this one might be one of those ones where I have to get use to the delivery to get into it
Dec 13, 2015 9. Like My Grams prod. by CMBeats download Spoiler: lyrics Everything I'm doing, do it, do it for the man All I all I ever wanted was a wish to be the man Got it, blew it, like a g--- Off a couple hunnit xans I'm the man Boi u lil like a gram Boi u lil like my grams I got problems but they past Way Tell karma imma alive cloud nine High I'm runnin away w the plug in my hand Like I'm a kid and it's punishment time Sometimes I wish that I never did rhyme subconscious exists but it's stuck in inside I wanna just let out let it go pride My mama said menthols don't ease a clean mind dirty I need them so hurry w tithes drinkin the ethanol edit the skies I wanna sing carefree who cares if they right I wanna just stop chasing the life May be the Sprite May be the spite I'm hatin the skies I ate till I die I'm late all the time on my way to a crime Bought me a roley so time is expansive this time I'm losing the vibe Ration don't abuse all the lines Patient Who's gonna sign Greatness this kid to the lime Fated Everything I'm doing, do it, do it for the man All I all I ever wanted was a wish to be the man Got it, blew it, like a g--- Off a couple hunnit xans I'm the man Boi u lil like a gram Boi u lil like my grams I got problems but they past karma imma imma alive I'm safe on cloud nine got here sighin I'd surmise That u eyein for the prize Too But u lil Like my grams So I doubt u understand I'm the man there's been too much talking today, so no lil blurb for this one. just listen. @Ordinary Joel @Cyreides @Mike Tyson @ThyNeighbour @Bleed @Fire Squad @JG2 @Skippy @Immy @Raziel @yeezyfan11
Dec 13, 2015 I like it. Your voice here is a good middle-ground between your eccentric and normal voice. Was a good listen. Also condolences on the L you took today. :ashgray:
Dec 16, 2015 yeah i wish the hook came out better for live like a prince, it just got muddled throughout the process report back when i say "hiiiigh" it sounds like im tryina hit the note Thug hit on She Notice lmao "iiiiiiiii" that L and yeah man i was thinking the same think about like my grams...the singing isnt too tone deaf either for once lol
Dec 18, 2015 10. Off the Boat prod. by TheBeatPlug download Sorry Ive been slacking with this because of finals, but im back with the last few tracks. On one hand, this track is straight forward, with how simple the hook is, but its also one of the more experimental joints on the project because of the 2nd verse and how its mixed to sound like im literally underwater. The reception to this one has been split so far, so I look forward to hearing what you guys think. Spoiler: lyrics hook: I came off the boat I'm fresh off the boat Ain't TALKIN bout trapping but came off the boat Came off the boat, I'm fresh off the boat verse 1: Ain't TALKIN bout trapping but I came off the boat My wrist, my wrist she helped to float My ice my vice it got me by throat I was like 5 aware of no more Swept off my porch and into a coach Flew to the states and washed up on shore I'm constantly cornered by all the allure Sometimes I wonder what my parents saw Saw in this world saw in this land They saw them a pearl inside of a clam I've seen it unfurl I don't like where we stand Minorities might as well be in demand Cuz we are the reason the seasons survive Tossed like the seeds planted for mead But needed reprise to align w their needs But they didn't see what we had unleashed We weren't they're beasts We found our peace And now I ride beats In every country Culinary Chef curri kinda scary Mess w me U gettin buried Yes that means I'm legendary Bet u seem all kindas of wary Aware that my air of allegations may b A reason why I am so bold and baring My soul for taking hook: I came off the boat I'm fresh off the boat Ain't TALKIN bout trapping but came off the boat Came off the boat, I'm fresh off the boat verse 2: Im lost in a land i aint been in before my mama was worried we wouldn’t be home i lowered my self to the pit with my soul and traded it whole so that we control… control all our goals so that we could grow old grow old and not fold so that we had a way we could break out the mold im Searchin my soul for their takin im told i feel ancient im holdin my patience for patients now beyond alone im lost in my zone im stuck in this mold nothing is gold or so im told @Ordinary Joel @Cyreides @Mike Tyson @ThyNeighbour @Bleed @Fire Squad @JG2 @Skippy @Immy @Raziel @yeezyfan11
Dec 18, 2015 this was also the last track i recorded for this project, at like 3 am in the basement while everyone else was sleeping lol
