Dec 6, 2015 Digital Dab is still Pop - This s--- is dope, you definitely sound at home over atmospheric-type production it feels like it let's you freely experiment with your delivery and song-writing. In this case both the hook and lyrics were executed well
Dec 7, 2015 Yeah I honesty don't have any real sense of songwriting yet and that's what I wanted to work on w this project. Glad you could pick up on that
Dec 7, 2015 4. i want (freestyle) prod. by Young Forever x TSP download Spoiler: lyrics hook: i want that life verse 1: i want that gold i want ice i want might i want that planet now lifted off spine i want the boulder to crumble with time i want that life want that life want whats mine i want the life i want gold i want ice i want a wife when weather seems fine i want the tension the tension to die i wanna not be so tethered to tithes sever the ties, im special i hide it help me escape, no measure of titans can measure my brain, im jimmy neutron inside of a cage, we used to move on used to you now, used to abuse the coupons no, coupe in the shop drank, soup so the funds flourished that month so its super intriguing how i waste a lot waste what i got, taste all till naught satisfied, sought... ...statuses, lost combating my costs, mad at my flaws im chasing whats gone, hanging from scorn family torn anime lore is my life evolved (what?!) wasted on tour, oh mi amour, oh u want more? ok u sure? hook: i want that life I dont want to act out the acts I dont wanna pretend like that verse 2: I wanna be young forever i wanna inhale ur aura i wanna just smile like joker ignornin erroneous order (what?!) Im happy Im high and not older The thought of it soon is now boredom It doesnt excite Ill ignore it But maybe I wanna be more than... Baby Im more than what I have achieved since I fell out of nest and I am still teething Sold all myself to the demon Hold on this helps me relive it Hold on this helps me relieve it Maybe I wanna be more than Maybe I wanna be important Maybe I wanna be normal... ...Maybe all I am is abnormal Special or extra, but still I am cordial Saying "Im young" till I dont wanna be You can either love it, hate it, dont bother me Im tripping on...stars this is lunacy Who knew where...Id be when Id be And Im often lost in my vocals Difference is skill is a parallax so this one of my favorites on the album, and mainly because i was able to freestyle a majority of it and still maintain a good song structure and s---. some of my favorite parts (like the beginning of the 2nd or "maybe i want to be normal") are freestyled..i think the first verse was the only one written to some extent. hopefully you guys dig it (i know a few have already said they do). if you have questions about the lyrics just ask hahah @Ordinary Joel @Cyreides @Mike Tyson @ThyNeighbour @Bleed @Fire Squad @JG2 @Skippy @Immy @Raziel @yeezyfan11
Dec 7, 2015 i thought I remembered this song i actually wasn't digging it that much at first on my first listen when I downloaded the tape, but I got into it after about a minute. btw, this is the first tape of yours I've copped for my library, so keep improving like this with the mixing and everything m8 Spoiler
Dec 7, 2015 yeah my voice on the hook can be off putting so it makes sense that it takes a min to get into the song. im starting to hit the right notes more often doe its a uphill battle when u got no natural vocal talent like me oh f--- thats dope man ive always wondered if people actually added any of my s--- to their library...and until recently i wouldnt blame anyone if they didnt. but yes gonna definitely keep trying ot make s--- that sounds better, regardless of whatever style i try on the track itself
Dec 7, 2015 pretty sure I'm going to, not trying to steal @Narsh's thunder just yet tho but when I do, I'll be posting up some more about each track, and influences for each one and the story it tells track by track with the interludes and everything too
Dec 7, 2015 thought id transcribe the lyrics rn cuz why not: hook: i want that life verse 1: i want that gold i want ice i want might i want that planet now lifted off spine i want the boulder to crumble with time i want that life want that life want whats mine i want the life i want gold i want ice i want a wife when weather seems fine i want the tension the tension to die i wanna not be so tethered to tithes sever the ties, im special i hide it help me escape, no measure of titans can measure my brain, im jimmy neutron inside of a cage, we used to move on used to you now, used to abuse the coupons no, coupe in the shop drank, soup so the funds flourished that month so its super intriguing how i waste a lot waste what i got, taste all till naught satisfied, sought... ...statuses, lost combating my costs, mad at my flaws im chasing whats gone, hanging from scorn family torn anime lore is my life evolved (what?!) wasted on tour, oh mi amour, oh u want more? ok u sure? hook: i want that life I dont want to act out the acts I dont wanna pretend like that verse 2: I wanna be young forever i wanna inhale ur aura i wanna just smile like joker ignornin erroneous order (what?!) Im happy Im high and not older The thought of it soon is now boredom It doesnt excite Ill ignore it But maybe I wanna be more than... Baby Im more than what I have achieved since I fell out of nest and I am still teething Sold all myself to the demon Hold on this helps me relive it Hold on this helps me relieve it Maybe I wanna be more than Maybe I wanna be important Maybe I wanna be normal... ...Maybe all I am is abnormal Special or extra, but still I am cordial Saying "Im young" till I dont wanna be You can either love it, hate it, dont bother me Im tripping on...stars this is lunacy Who knew where...Id be when Id be And Im often lost in my vocals Difference is skill is a parallax @Ordinary Joel @Cyreides @Mike Tyson @ThyNeighbour @Bleed @Fire Squad @JG2 @Skippy @Immy @Raziel @yeezyfan11 d--- my s--- is fire
Dec 7, 2015 and im often lostinmyvocals :allears i know @Skippy said that parts his least favorite but i love it lol. that staggering came about naturally cuz the entire verse was off the dome but it just fit so well imo
Dec 7, 2015 oh i just realized i forgot to transcribe like the last 4 lines of the song well good cuz i was just rambling and im pretty sure i said "you knew i was horny, you knew i waited, faded" lmao edit: oh and the "you used to call me a slow poke" hahaha
Dec 7, 2015 Yeah tbh I just didn't enjoy that part, it sounded like something eminem would do if he wanted to be experimental
Dec 7, 2015 It's good. Gotta admit I'm not drawn into it as much as the previous tracks so far though.
