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Crookedeye - I Try?

Started by Crookedeye, Nov 13, 2023, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Crookedeye
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    Crookedeye Emo

    Nov 13, 2023



    Heard the beat and started writing. Couple hours work and unfinished but ye I thought id share

    Had no sleep so voice is croaky and too tired to write another verse rn and hook is just filler
     
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  2. Evad
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    Evad Balls

    Nov 13, 2023
    This is nice man, and the hook would fit well if you did better take, imo
     
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  3. Crookedeye
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    Crookedeye Emo

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    Ty, and ye I just did a lil hook randomly lol il probably just rap the whole thing when it's done.

    Was just tired and bored and needed some therapy ya know lol
     
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  4. JMG
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    JMG

    Nov 13, 2023
    Sounds off beat
     
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  5. LasiK
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    LasiK d-mn fine coffee

    Nov 13, 2023
    theres potential here. ur flow on the beat (w/o drums) was pretty on point.

    if you have access to an autotune plugin (or pitcher, on FL) just tune ur vocals to the key of the beat and the hook will come out a lot better.

    dig it
     
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  6. Crookedeye
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    Lmfao
     
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