Jan 3, 2016

so umm this is my first attempt at a "club" song. its weird. and s---. and mixed poorly. whatever

@CreativeSXN

also special mention to @Narsh if you can make it to the third verse you'll see why.

 

Jan 3, 2016

wow, why are the verses mixed so bad? did you mix the hook? its like night and day

 

Jan 3, 2016

no I didn't mix the hook. and because I have no knowledge of mixing at all, I just guess. I know its horrible. I need to learn.

 

Jan 3, 2016

I hate to be like this, but when the verses come in... Its just completely 100% like you're rapping to a different instrumental or something and the mixing is atrocious. Props for trying bro. Keep at it, just work on staying on beat homie. The chorus and beat have potential even if its not my style. @The Last Son

 

Jan 3, 2016

so thats not you on the chorus?

 

Jan 3, 2016

the hook sounds dope..

 

Jan 3, 2016

h--- no, the chorus was already on the beat when I got it.