My First Music Video

Started by Charlton01, Dec 14, 2015, in Creative Add to Reading List

  1. Charlton01
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    Dec 14, 2015
    So you may or may not, most likely not have heard the song i dropped the other day, I didn't want to say anything about the video as it wasn't ready by then.
    Anyhow here it is:


    This is the first time i've gone through with a project like this so I wasn't really sure how it would turn out.
    Most of this video was shot with a crew of 2, my friend and I.

    Lemme know what you think of the song and/or video!
    I'm quite happy with it, but I'd love to hear external opinions!

    Also follow me on facebook, youtube and soundcloud if you're digging my sound! (links in description)
     
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  2. Ordinary Joel
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    Dec 14, 2015
    Looks like you had fun making this which is good to see!

    I thought it was well done.

    @Feedback peep this.
     
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    Dec 14, 2015
    this is cool. i like the concept.
     
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    this is niceee
     
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    Cyreides gfy

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    [​IMG]
    1:38
    "The beat go off?"
     
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    Dopeeee
     
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    COOL!
     
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  9. Charlton01
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    Dec 15, 2015
    Hahahahah This made me laugh man!!!

    Thanks to everyone else! Love how well its being received!

    @Ordinary Joel, it got really tiring after 8 hours of straight filming! but yeah was definitely fun filming and putting it together. Guess cause it was done with people i know, so the vibes were pretty chill :)
     
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    certified still bumps
     
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    Dec 15, 2015
    sorry what does that mean? :s hahah
     
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    He's still bumps the track is what it means.
     
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    still goes hard the day after i first listened to it :)
     
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    Dec 17, 2015
    Oh right! Whoop whoop, this that new bump in the whip s--- :P

    p.s do any of you know/recommend any blogs/websites or anything of the sort I can submit stuff like this to? I'd like to get more exposure by reaching larger audiences!
     
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    Ordinary Joel Happiness begins when selfishness ends

    Dec 17, 2015
    @Nay Nay and @KnowRayJones could prolly help.
     
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    Late af reply i know but that would be dope as h--- if i could get some sites down!
     
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    ok this jiggy
     
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    I liked all the scenes where you was in the leather chair. they seemed to be shot the best.

    I thought the interlude in the song was pretty corny though

    pretty good beat selection. your flow is pretty much there the whole song but maybe cause of your accent (?), at the end of some lines you'd lose me at the last word.

    as far as mixing, it sounds real clean there, vocals could maybe be a tad louder. overall solid song tho brah. good work.
     
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  19. Charlton01
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    Jan 11, 2016
    Appreciate the detailed feedback man :)

    Hahah ironically the leather chair scenes were done very last minute and kinda rushed cause it wasn't planned, just thought we'd add it when we saw it.

    As for the interlude, I can see how it comes off as corny, the actual beat had the interlude in it and I just worked with it instead of trying to chop it up and remove it.
    And I thought it would make up for not having a hook as a placement for something interesting to happen! ahah

    But thanks for the watch and feedback man! You da real MVP!! ahah
     
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